Good:
- I think my story in general is really good. I think content is solid and i think that i was lucky to have an life experiance that fitted are criteria so well; which i think i have wrote well about.
- I also like my formatting the transitions from one point to another. For example moving from the ordinary world prior to the incident and then how i changed.
- I agree that a good way to improve would be to add some dialogue from the confrontation between myself and the group.
- Also just making sure i keep on top of my grammar and wording becuase sometimes i miss it when proof reading and i can be prone to those simple errors!
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